Comments : Silver raindrops

  • 12 years ago

    by Sunflower

    That was really really really good! Really powerful too. Incrediable Job!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Melissa

    So incredibly sad, but you conveyed your feelings so beautifully!
    "I could've given everything.
    Instead, you took it all."
    ^^^ These lines really spoke to me, I completely relate. The ending was quite powerful, too... Beautifully written, from the heart...

  • 12 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Ok WOW! i've only read a few of your poems, and you are in my favs, but this one is AWESOME! i love that tears are like silver raindrops. I just love that. good twist on words! keep that up! Jpoet*

  • EXceLLeNt sTruCtUre.. i LoVe oW yOu PerfEctLy mAKe thE worDs rHyMe.. ^^
    wHeN i ReaD yOuR poEmS, iT's aS iF i'M tAkEn inTo thE PoeM's WorLs.. i'M CompLeTeLy aBSorBeD!!..

    aGaiN, NiCe WorK!!.. ^^,

  • 11 years ago

    by Mr M


  • 11 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    The flow of this piece is perfect, and the atmosphere is greatly created. The wording is good, I like the words usage in this poem a lot. My favorite stanza is:
    -Still silver raindrops fall upon
    The world I could have had.
    And tears are streaming down my face.
    Were you meant to make me sad?-

    Keep up, 5/5 from me

  • 10 years ago

    by InvisibleHourglass

    The rain is falling down on me
    But only silver raindrops fall.
    I could've given everything.
    Instead, you took it all.

    perfect. the whole poem is, but this is above that.

    We listened to the song a while.
    You said you could fix me.
    But I have sought, to no avail,
    And waited patiently.

    as broken as we'll ever be, we still hope there's someone to fix us.
    I loved this C. It was perfect, and instant favorite