by Sunflower
That was really really really good! Really powerful too. Incrediable Job!!! |
by Melissa
So incredibly sad, but you conveyed your feelings so beautifully! |
by *Charisma*
Ok WOW! i've only read a few of your poems, and you are in my favs, but this one is AWESOME! i love that tears are like silver raindrops. I just love that. good twist on words! keep that up! Jpoet* |
EXceLLeNt sTruCtUre.. i LoVe oW yOu PerfEctLy mAKe thE worDs rHyMe.. ^^ |
by Mr M
Wow. |
The flow of this piece is perfect, and the atmosphere is greatly created. The wording is good, I like the words usage in this poem a lot. My favorite stanza is: |
The rain is falling down on me |