Excellent job. Me and my friends give you an A+++++++

It was really really good. It made us cry.

I like how you kept repeating the saying and I love the way you ended it. :) Awesome job.

Wow..its pretty intense. the repetition was a great - it got the message through especially since you changed then during the end.

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Wow.....this is a wonderful poem!! I love it like soo much!!! It is really good............keep writing!!! This actually made me cry, cause it is SOOO like my life...good job!!:)

Omg!! i really felt something when i read this poem. you're such a good writer

WOW...there are no words to explain how this made me feel...it deeply touched me and I think it's an AWESOME poem...keep writing...:)...(where at in Ohio do you live?...one of my good friends lives up there) lol newayz
*megan*

Holy geez.. youre amazing. i dont even know what to say..
dee

EVERY TiME i READ THiS POEM iT GiVES ME GOOSE BUMPS!! i lOVE iT...i HAD iT THE FRONT OF My BINDER WiTH YOUR U/N iN THE CORNER lAST YEAR...i JUS FEll iN lOVE WiTH iT...i CAN RElATE TO iT AND EVERyTHiNG...THiS iS My FAVORiTE POEM OF YOURS!!

Haii gr8 job keepup tha great work ur obviously a natural 5/5

This is SO great!
i almost cried reading it because it explains what im going through right now...
this is a wonderful poem!
keep it up!

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XxAshleyxX

Omg ! i really like this poem becuz it really relates to what im goin thru rite now =/ (I LOVE IT)