Just your Ex

by The Poetic Child   Apr 23, 2006


You were so Precious to me,
But its like i wasn't to you
did everything i can
Nothing i did mattered to you

Your Eyes Brighten out
Your lips were so tender
But all you really did
was put my heart in the blender

The Sweet taste of our love
I felt so much, i loved you so
The pain you left me
The pain, cause you let me go

You broke up with me
But my feelings stay true
Just only a little bit has change
but really i still love you

You've torn me out wide
Broke me like the nothing i am
Broke me like was cotton
Broke me to a lesser Man

But i cant stop thinking about you
And i don't know what will happen next
But i cant even bear to the fact
To you..I'm Just your Ex

Dedication*- To those who've had there heart broken and still think about them every moment, and there not even thinking of you back..

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  • 17 years ago

    by stargirl49

    Omg!! great job, david!!! i love it!!! you're an awesome writer. keep up the good work, and check out some of my new poems!!:)

  • 17 years ago

    by Ian brennan

    Holy crap that is good that definintly reminds me off me and my ex girlfriend.
    Great freaking job

  • 17 years ago

    by Mephastophilis

    But all you really did
    was put my heart in the blender~

    I really like these two lines because its so graphic and shows the depth of your hurt- I can so relate- i've been there but it seems we all have to go through heartache b4 we really find true love- great job. Take care XxX

  • 17 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    WOW I felt this sooo much. This rly is one awesomly powerful piece..way to capture this feeling...WOW EXCELLENT EXCELLENT EXCELLENT! :)Keep it up buddy.

    Lissa

  • 17 years ago

    by Just That Girl

    This Is Once Again A Great Poem...I Just Luv Your Poems... This Time I'm Speachless...Your Poem Is So Fantastic That I'm Speachless...And It Is So Rare For Me To Not Have Sumthin To Say....
    Keep Up The Great Work
    Take Care....
    Luv,
    The Bell....

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