This is very good I feel the hurt and love in this poem and I have been in these shoes great work 5/5

This was so nice is relates to excactly how i feel...it was amazing!! i loved it...

Awwww...i really liked this one too....your writing style isnt very organized or structured but i kinda like it like that .... i like the way that you write...i can tell that what you say is coming straight from you and you mean what you say...i like that... i have been in the situation as this poem is referring to and it is so hard to love someone who doesnt care as much about you as you do about them and this poem reveal those feeling very well