Bride Of Gothica

by SCARECROW   Apr 25, 2006


This is a poem I wrote solely to be interpreted by you. You alone. If you try to see meanings I have hidden in it I am afraid you will fail miserably. I have hidden none. On that happy note, read, enjoy, despise (it is up to you) and for now, I bid you a truly fond 'catch ya l8r! ^^'
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Attenuated yet vindictive seraph
vying for obsolete perfection
to give, to take, to justify
from starry rivers to gelatin sky
(no more than a mere obsession).

Sordid and insiduous beloved
shrouded in ribbons of gossamer thread
do not disturb her crystal reverie
(before the sun drowns out at sea)
frail, with accentuated aureole, to wed.

Disconsolate for undefined aspiration
more or less ten thousand years
(rather akin to jaded nightingales)
for a flowerbed of magenta hail
encumbers thought, defiled by tears.

Sinful thus delicious embrace
(accepting, yield unwitting redemption)
as the evening sky reverberates carmine
in shades akin to the most luscious wine
binding the heavens with godly exemption.

(Serene virgin, now incensed)
Naivety flees from precarious eyes
for in the air anonymity flutters
through open hearts, and closed shutters
by the ligneous floor on which she lies.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    Beautiful true poetry
    The intricate wording really sets a different tone over the whole poem and it flows unnaturally well =)
    I interupted, probably, in a completely different way than most but i enjoyed immensly (sp?)
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Forsaken

    I cant even begin to describe how incredibly beautiful this piece is. Though you didnt put any hidden meanings in it, it seems like you are trying to tell the world something. Gorgeous work.

  • 17 years ago

    by Elynnka

    Wonderful wording and descriptions.
    Good write!
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Tru

    All I can say is wicked. Keep it up. I like the Twisted side of things so this tickled my taste for deep and dark.

    TRU

  • 17 years ago

    by Missing Angel Juan

    Hey, are the brackets in this poem in the vein of sylvia plath's a mad girl's lovesong? anyways this is some pretty good shit, tiffy, keep it up. youre a darling!