Hey that was beautifully written. loved the way you actually wrote it out in song style. great work! :D keep it up. xoxo ruthie

DUDE!!! THIS IS ABSOLUTELY AMAZING!!! theres no other words for this...near perfect rhythm, excellent rhyme, and great imagery. this is one of my all-time favorite poems, definitely. keep it up =]

DUDE!!! THIS IS ABSOLUTELY AMAZING!!! theres no other words for this...near perfect rhythm, excellent rhyme, and great imagery. this is one of my all-time favorite poems, definitely. keep it up =]

I felt like I was sinking with you as I read. Nice job.

Another Great poem from you MemoirsofMe!!! The feeling was really strong and relatable, a talent every writer must find, and you found it very easily.

Hey, I love this poem its excellent I gave it 5/5 although the last part ,
"Im upside down
In this foolish town
Let me go
Before I get too low"
came out of no where I didnt like that at all. it doesnt seem to fit with this poem. Its still a great one!