I forgot how it felt to be in love, no worries you just reminded me. =) Try not to forget your own words, or you'll end up like me and have only sad / depressing words to write about. Anyway.... I loved your poem I love the great imagery you use. 5/5 Well DOne!!!!!!

Nicely done the language was heavenly. In places the flow was a tad off and the rhyme lost its impact but overall this was a soo romantic and a pleasure to read....3 times....i couldn't help myself hehe....

[lostlaureate - come find me]

Omg that was such a beautiful poem! it was very descriptive & i loved the feeling behind it. Great job! 5/5*

Your use of unique words created a very vivid imagery. Packed with emaotion this was a beautiful write!

While our hands touch, cupid flies next to my ear and whispers:"True love"

I loved that line!

The flow faltered a little in places and this made the rhyming seem a little off too - but the wording was beautiful, and the image you painted was lovely to see . . . Great poetry.

Peace. [Sole]

Some of the lines run long while other's seem short, but the words fit perfectly. The image is vivid and beautiful. But I think largest bliss feels a bit off. Maybe greatest bliss? or something like that. It's up to you.

Excellent poem, very sweet.

Love,
Line

A very good rhyme scheme with such a powerful message of love and being happy with what you have made me feel warm to read this

Sondos

"get a feeling I just can't deny" It's true that you can't pretend once you've fallen
This poem was just so beautifully written and very sweet/romantic
The only flaw I can think of is that sometimes the lines break flow...but it was still excellent :D

Hey nice poem I especially liked the line,
Everything is perfect but it still doesn't feel right

You write great poetry. Nice job! Keep up the good work! =)

I'd say.. its plain excellent
5/5
love
amy

Genuinely stunning, I speechless (which I must say is a feat in itself) I really loved this poem, I think any girl would love to get a poem like this (if anyone is willing to argue...) Superb, just flawless, I can't criticise at all. The use of language was exquisite and the rhyme faultless, beautifully expressed, 5/5 x

Beautifully done. I love the way you painted a clear picture in your reader's mind. Great work! 5/5

Awwwww i loved this poem it was beautifull written and just a great piece keep it up your a great writter with amazing talent 5/5

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

This poem was great and don't worry about the others saying bad things about this poem because I think you are a very good poet and I just wanted to say keep up the good work

Love Netta

As somebody who is currently in love, I especially find this poem appealing and very very well written. I can actually feel the emotion that you write with and don't EVER stop, you have talent. Keep writing!

XxOoOxx

Trsitan

Awww...this is wonderfully written you did a fantastic job... nice poem it was just so cute and I could just imagine lots of girls saying Awwwww...at the same time after you read this lol

Awwww this is great! amazing job! shows great feeling :) 5/5