Awww....I hope this isn't personall experience because if it is i'm sorry :( well written, very deep 4/5

Wow really good!

This Is Yet Again A Wonderful Poem...Your Poems Feel So Real...Pure Talent I Suppose...Keep It Up...And I Hope To See More Of You Poems Soon
Take Care...
Love,
The Bell...:]

Ouch is that bout mike? his not worth it gal.

Aw....I'm in the same situation you are in. Cept I'm the girl that he left. And for you you're the boy that she left. I cry all the time and I write all the time. I'm gonna take a day or two to post the 110 poems that I've written after 4 months. I've kept myself inside and I can't go on. I'm there and I can't make myself go through. I hope everything works out for you. && if you ever need advice..comment me on one of my poems and I'll comment with advice back.

This poem was also heartstopping. Buddy..you write sooo good. Become a writer and you'll defffff go far.

Such a great poem! soo sad, but very beautiful and expressive, I love it

Nice ryhme..ruthem a bit off but i thoroughly enjoyed it. :)

:) Lissa