Comments : Be My Escape.

  • 17 years ago

    by Miranda

    This poem was fcking awesome..i really

  • 17 years ago

    by Miranda

    This poem was fcking awesome..i really

  • 17 years ago

    by Miranda

    K what the heck...that like wouldn't let me send it..haha..well neways-i love your poem! keep up the great work!!
    -miranda

  • 17 years ago

    by Lexie

    What a wonderful poem. I really really loved it. Keep up the good work.

  • 17 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    You tellin me about depression?
    Ill stop writing sad poems, the day you stop writing about death!

    but other then that Good job
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by melly xx

    "And death, please, be my escape."
    that last line really summed it up and made it a simple yet impressive poem
    good job
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by donk2ymouth

    I really like this poem..You took such an over-used and uncreative topic, and made it really original and it didn't seem over-used at all.

    Great job, it's 1 of a kind.

    I also like the ending poem, it leaves a big thought with me that I'll probably be thinking about for a while.