Comments : An unspoken story

  • 17 years ago

    by xAmx

    Very good keep up the work

  • 17 years ago

    by Just That Girl

    Your Poem Is Sooo Great! Oh My God! I Have NEVER Seen Such A Great Poem! It Rocks My Socks! Keep Up The Amazing Work && Hope To See More Of Your Poems Soon Enuff!
    Take Care...
    Luv,
    The Bell :]

  • 17 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    AMAZING
    lovely Rhyme
    Heart-felt message
    Great flow
    it was an all around Great job
    keep it up
    This poem was Great
    5/5
    ~TPOMH~

  • 17 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    Woah!! This poem is so great!! Its really well written and i love the flow of it! Excellent! I love it. 5/5 no questions about it!

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Wow again wording was great I loved the rhyme too you have great talent nice!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Fallen Angel

    Gd luv ya chica

  • 16 years ago

    by claire

    I liked this one a lot - 5/5! =) pls r/r/c one of my newest one thx!

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    This was brilliant! I loved the language, it described war perfectly. I felt as if I was captured inside your poem and was seeing everything through my own eyes. Well done *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSuicidalxx

    Beautiful poem....there are no words to descibe how awesome this poem is...great work ....give it a 10! LOVE IT !!!!!!!! keep up the good work !!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Cheshire Kat

    Ooooo, nice nice! Wonderfully done, but I don't feel the feeling of war....(sorry!) 5.