Birthday gone wrong

by Ashlin   Apr 28, 2006


Waking up to voices
cheerful as can be
"HAPPY BIRTHDAY ASHLIN!"
were the words directed to me

hugging my two cousins
thinking its a good day
for its my 13th year to live
glad i had planned to stay

walking up the stairs
with baby Vanessa by my side
smelling the sweet aroma
that was coming from outside

birthday music playing
with cheerful hums from my aunt
as she turns around and sees me
and says her cheerful birthday chant

the day seemed to pass by smooth
nothing could go wrong
no pain was seen upon my face
for i had left it where it belonged

my other two cousins and uncle
where at work for the day
but they plan to come home early
for my big special day

the sun now going down
and everyone is here
dancing smiling and laughter
where all the things you could see and hear

but not a moment to later
a fight had broke out
between my aunt and cousin Jayson
something i could have gone without

he left me there after the fight
without even a happy birthday
left the room silent and awkward
there was nothing no one could say

not later after that
the awkwardness had be broken
my other cousin Jeremy walked out
and still no words had been spoken

tears of rage streaming down her face
as Vanessa starts to cry
was this really happening?
my uncle stomps off without saying goodbye

my cake not even touched
no gifts where handed out
i swear this was all i bad dream
as i just wanted to pout

my aunt tried to make it better
acting as if nothing went on
i did not want to be mean
so i just gave a big yawn

my special day now ruined
my teen year i know shall now be bad
as i flopped on the bed
and let out all the pain i had

*OK.. i didn't know how to end this.. but this is a true story.. the fight that had went on was bad.. and ruined my big teen birthday..*

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  • 17 years ago

    by Regina

    On my 14th Birthday, I envited my whole class to my party, guess who showed up? one girl whom I did not like. and I got "used" cemet roller skates. Of course I cant totaly relate, but it was an awesome poem never the less..

  • 17 years ago

    by Katelyn McLaughlin

    Im sorry i know how that is i had a friend over on my 16th and she totaly loused it up

  • 17 years ago

    by Sexi_Cassie

    It was ok but a little scatchy at the end