Comments : Emptiness

  • 17 years ago

    by clare

    Woah thts really gud...
    Very deep! i love it!
    check out my poems n tell me wat u think
    XXX

  • 17 years ago

    by dora

    Hey darl l0t 0f em0ti0n in this p0em. havent sp0ken t0 u in agez h0pe ur 0hk!! =]

    l0ve fr0m
    d0ra

  • 17 years ago

    by firexflys

    Nice job i like the deepness to it keep up the good work and keep your head up girl. love ya's 5.5

  • 17 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Beautiful sad penned, so much emotions....hopefully everything well with you..be safe.

    p/s thanks for your nice comment, much appreciated.

  • 17 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    Wonderfully written is all i have to say.... :)

    Mallori

  • 17 years ago

    by Mezmeryz

    I love it...because i can relate hell of alot. if iv read it the way you are saying it then yes..i can relate totally...my favorite stanza...
    No body understands how I feel,
    Because I realize I'm all alone,
    Although everyone is by my side,
    I feel I don't belong.

    xx

  • 17 years ago

    by HUGIYDAWY

    Hey nice poem i lyk ur writting.... im addin u to my favs nice work .xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Awwwh, this was so sad but beautifully written!
    The imagery was great and the wording was a joy to read.

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Awww wow this is sad and good nice job

  • 16 years ago

    by Lost Soul 691

    Absolutley packs a punch. Nice job!