Hehe - nice. I'm not a big fan of country music to be honest - but these lyrics are good. You should find a country band on myspace and send your lyrics to them - you would get the credit and I'm sure they would be more than happy to work with great lyrics like those!

Peace. [Sole]

Really nice work here, my only advise is that when you write lyrics to lable them, you know [verse1] or just [v1] will do, [v2][v3] or however many [chorus] [reprise] [bridge] ect... other than that, really nice work, you sure its your first?? :P keep it up!

Omg...even though i'm not a fan of country music these lyrics left me speechless. this is really good...i loved it.

This was good. I don't listen to a lot of country, so I was unable to imagine a song to it. But that may just be me.
Love,
Line

That was a very intense song. I think that its well rhymed with a pretty good beat and a good story

Sondos

I don't listen to music unless I'm in the car with someone who does themself. I do like some songs. Honky Tonk Badonkadonk, and other such things. Anyway, it's good writing. Keep it up.

Wow..the chorus is so memorable I found myself humming along and tapping my feet to this one, it certainly is different from your usual stuff but I think you pulled it off pretty well.

[lostlaureate - come find me]

Wonderfully written lyrics Kaylee... Your talent shines through. Great writing :)

I love country music that was very good i think you should write more country songs 5/5

This is really good! I wish i was as talented as you! This would make a great song, the flow in it was absolutely perfect!!! I definitely think that you should write some more! Great job! 5/5**

Good job Kaylee! I like this. You did a great job at a country song. I think you should write another one.

Drank whiskey, downed another beer.
There goes the Devil saying, “No fear.”

^^This was one of my favorite parts of the song. Good job and keep up the good work. 5/5

I didn't find one thing I didnt like in this song. :)

For a country song.. This was pretty good. I'm not really into country music. But I rekon if this became a song, I'd listen to it. Wondeful job. Keep up the great work. I love reading your poetry! 5/5 And thanx for the comment. Meant alot!

`natalie xx

Well I'm hardley a country fan...but as I write lyrics I can still appreciate that this is an excellent song!
You kept the flow well, and didn't lose it once, the repetition wasn't overused but very effective
I loved it...your vocab is also well chosen
Kepp writing :)

I totaly agree with sole :) i'm not a country music fan but those lyrics are very good :) you should try to find a band to work with :) 5/5

~StefQ

Hey I liked it! It was really great and the flow was brilliant. I thought it was a little different to what I usually read and that's what I liked about it. Keep up the great work :D

I'm not much of a country music fan. But when I read this lyrics it really takes a shine. This would make a great song. You write with such detail. I love it. Music is inspiring. Yes,you should write another. Kat

I'm not a big country fan but what you write is .. wonderful! I loved it :) 5/5

Another really amazing piece! I don't really know what to say other than that you are obviously incredibly talented! Again I'd really love to hear the music that accompanies these lyrics as I feel that it would really bring the words to life. 5/5! x

I thought it was great myself.. im a big fan of country music though.. it was awesome loved it your very talented 5/5

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

Haha, an interesting song I must say. Not extremely well written, but heald my attention the whole way. Great job!!! I really enjoyed the chorus...