I Love You

by Jackie Marie   Apr 30, 2006


I am a poet without words
When I think of you and I
You are just so special
I need you by my side
When I try to think of the words
To describe how you make me feel
I become so lost, confused
There is no way this can be real
I feel like this is a fairy tale
With a Princess and a Knight
When I look into your eyes
I know that this is right
Without you here with me
I would be nothing at all
You are my shoulder to cry on
You catch me when I fall
Your arms wrapped around me
I feel secure, protected from this place
You are my first and only love
This feeling could never be replaced
You wipe the tears from my eyes
And erase all the pain and sorrow
I love you today, and I will love you tomorrow

*I know, this was a little rocky at times. If you have any suggestions or advice, I would like to know! :)

I love you..*

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  • 17 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    Again another lovely write.
    As far as criticism goes some of the lines were a bit long and interrupted the flow a little. Also some of the rhymes seemed a little forced.
    Other than that it was a lovely sweet write full of sentiment.

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa Lea

    This is wonderful..Oh, to be in love....5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    This is a great poem! I don't have any suggestions to improve upon your work--I think its perfect the way it is-- My favorite part is the final part:

    ''I love you today, and I will love you tomorrow''

    Great sum-up to the poem!

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    Very beautiful. very dignified. i totally dug it. start to finish. brilliant

  • 17 years ago

    by Adriana

    I like this poem a lot as well as your other love poems... great job!