This was a really good poem. If I could give any constructive criticism, I would say, revising some of the long lines, because as I was reading them I got lost in the flow of the poem. Just a though, and it might just be me. But, none-the-less, great poem. If you could please read/comment some of my own poems. (Other reading this can do so as well! :D ) Thanc, and keep writing.

Frank

The rhyming scheme seemed a bit incosistent, it seemed to rhyme in places but not in others. At times the imagery was a bit cliche but I really liked the ending:

"I love you today, and I will love you tomorrow"

[lostlaureate - come find me]

^^^ that was my favorite part as well....its great when you end a poem and still have the readers attention it shows you have some kind of talent......no suggestions here, just keep it up and with yourself and your own help you get better and better! I enjoyed this write!
And thanks so much for you comment!
Chels

Hey it was really great and it has a great style to it. I think it was very sweet and it really cheered me up Keep up the great work :D

I like this poem a lot as well as your other love poems... great job!

Very beautiful. very dignified. i totally dug it. start to finish. brilliant

This is a great poem! I don't have any suggestions to improve upon your work--I think its perfect the way it is-- My favorite part is the final part:

''I love you today, and I will love you tomorrow''

Great sum-up to the poem!

5/5

This is wonderful..Oh, to be in love....5/5

Again another lovely write.
As far as criticism goes some of the lines were a bit long and interrupted the flow a little. Also some of the rhymes seemed a little forced.
Other than that it was a lovely sweet write full of sentiment.