Comments : If I could be anything, I'd be...

  • 11 years ago

    by matt acuna

    Nice..i have heard you say some of these things before at school and stuff but its about time you put it on here....and about my new poem...what are the mistakes? tell me...so i can make it better...well watever...lay...

    ~matt~

  • 11 years ago

    by Jaime

    The ending is so sweet, I love that poem. Great job.

  • 11 years ago

    by RadianceInReverse

    I like this poem Robert you can be so creative...although your flow was a lil off..i still enjoyed reading it....Miss ya...Love Joclyn

  • 11 years ago

    by xmauix

    Hey money, this is the one you read to me walking home from expresso right, its really good...

  • 11 years ago

    by NothingGoldCanStay

    Haha! that's funny... Its really good!
    XxXNothing-Gold-Can-StayXxX

  • 11 years ago

    by devintwinkletoes

    Awww that's cute, I liked it a lot. Keep writing. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by SmileeItsBritt

    How cute! I love it soo much!!! >3

  • 11 years ago

    by Robin

    Too cute

  • 11 years ago

    by melly xx

    I was looking for a poem to make me laugh..
    and this poem did a damn good job!
    it was really cute and funny
    definetly cheered me up and put a smile on my face!!
    good job!!
    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Lol that was funny. & it was really sweet the way that you ended it. Great job!

  • 11 years ago

    by Katelyn McLaughlin

    Wow that was so sweet i dont usualy like love poems of any kind but that was nice

  • 11 years ago

    by megan

    Your good. and it was pretty funny and sweet.

  • 11 years ago

    by ♥Leah♥

    I love this poems its sooooooo cute and AWESOME and very true!!! lol

    luv luv, leah

  • 11 years ago

    by april

    OH MY GOD IF I WERE YOU I WILL GO IN LIVE POETY YOU R gr8

  • 11 years ago

    by *Chels & Britt*

    LOL Awwwww!! That was so funy about the being naked thing hahah! Wow! you know you weren't kidding haha!
    I loved this poem, it was pretty funny and you ended of sweet....I wish I would have thought to write about this!
    Good Job! 5/5
    Chels

  • 11 years ago

    by brittani

    Wow that really sweet and really nice for a guy to say! lol l8

  • 11 years ago

    by S R P

    Heh good job :-)

  • 11 years ago

    by ♥SeRioUsLy DyinG♥

    OmG.....i LoVe iT....i TiNk DiS iS Da CuTesT FuNNi PoeM i HaVe EvEr ReaD....KeeP uP WiT Da GooD PoeMs....PeaCe OuT....

    -patti-

  • 11 years ago

    by *Juicy_Secret*

    This is so beautiful it reminds me of this boy who i've secretly been in love with for going on 8 years he said he wants to be the blood that flows thru my heart

    Juicy secret

  • 11 years ago

    by Katt

    How funny and sweet! It is cool how you put it metaphorically so true. Great poem.