Forever Sad

by The Poetic Child   Apr 30, 2006


Holding your hands in the night
Holding your body next to me
Endless Days when it felt so right
Endless days, of a memory

The days we laid and Kissed
The days of when i felt your lips
Passion was full, you held my wrist
As my hands gently felt your hips

But there were days you didn't feel
there were days you didn't see
The days when your love wasn't real
But to love you, was only me

I Cry in my heart every night
Cause i think about you all day
The beautiful look and sight
I talk to god, because i need to pray

I pray to him for him take it away
To take away the suffering and pain
But i just feel worser then next day
and i get poured in even harder rain

You gave me a permanent Stab
And really i hope your forever glad
cause while your being happy
I sit here...........Forever Sad

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  • 17 years ago

    by Tina Carr AKA Snickers

    Aw...
    You have an emo sad..
    lolz
    Well...
    Haha..
    That makes you..
    Premosta?
    lolz
    (prep, emo, gangsta)
    haha
    w/e it is, this is a great poem!!

    Love
    Tina
    < 33

  • 17 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Everytime i read this it gets me in ways I can't explain...this poem is so deep, so everything it's unbelieveable! keep it up, buddy! please read some of my poems that you havent read, thnxs. Lataz' God bless!

    always ur friend
    Lissa

  • 17 years ago

    by simply taylor

    Aahhh....david...don't be sad. this poem was sooo good. i really know how that feels. i could relate to this poem a lot. you have a talent for writing good poems and amazing me everytime i read another one. sweet job.
    kortney

  • 17 years ago

    by Tasha

    Wow greatest poem like ever! I loved how everything was writen and how it had a brilliant easy and flow. Good job.

  • 17 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    The first 2 stanzas are so Freakn HOTT..lol so amazing. Nice poem..keep writing.

    Lissa

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