Comments : The mortal kiss

  • 17 years ago

    by Elynnka

    I love it!! It's so so so so...amazingly beautiful! It's the best vampire poem I've ever read *hugs her*

  • 17 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Gr8 poem lots of dtail! 5/5 4 sure!
    ~*Who Cares?*~

  • 17 years ago

    by Dark Angel Girl

    Such amazing detail and such a beatiful but sad story of love......love it.....5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Meagan

    Very interesting, every Vampire Dreamers dream, but then again Vampires and Vampress can be diffrent. but very good detal for a poem, but imagaine actually meeting a Vampire in an alley. and he really might not be that nice....some aren't.

    Lady Meagan