Cool poem! It wasn't confusing to me at least... and you expressed your self very well. I liked the beginning the most but that's just me! keep up the good work!
-cheers- ^_^

Really great poem huni....imiss you soo much...im going 2 find josie now...its like 7:30 in the morning lmfao im soo tired.....i love you so much babyyy bff

Great poem i loved it!!!

Beautiful poem hun!! hope you're Alright!!!
keep it up and good luck
Yours
NemO x0x0x0x0x0x

I never knew 'situations' that werent messed up. :)

Whatever's going on, you're writing is still first class.

{added you, can't wait to talk lol}

xxx

I love this poem. I've been through this stage, so I know what you mean. Great work, I really really loved it. Sorry for the late comment.

Love
Michelle