Woh! Deep! Reallly deep! I loved it!it was an excellent poem and the flow was awesome as well! I can relate to it and im sure some ppl will as well... well your feeling were really strong! and if you need someone to talk to im here! Well that's all for now.
-cheers- ^_^

Wonderful piece hun
u r the best ;)
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I can't take it, leave.''

and

I have no strength to fight this''

There's something about the beat of those words.

Wow... this is very strongly written and very heartfelt. Great job on this as well. Keep it up.

Love
Michelle