Really stunning use of language to express an obviously deeply felt feeling of contention. I love the repetition and can't help but feel that these are designed to be lyrics (am I wrong?) if so I'd really love to hear the music to accompany them! Again, great write 5/5! x
Brilliant, just brilliant! lyrics im assuming, and amazing ones at that. this piece was so insistent on forgeting a someone, on the surface, and sort of having to suck that up. but at the end, a major twist, which makes it such an enjoyable and astounding read! i loved this piece! please keep writing and stay safe, strong, and healthy!
an avid fan,