Comments : On The Face Of It.

  • 12 years ago

    by Fallen Angel

    Really stunning use of language to express an obviously deeply felt feeling of contention. I love the repetition and can't help but feel that these are designed to be lyrics (am I wrong?) if so I'd really love to hear the music to accompany them! Again, great write 5/5! x

  • 12 years ago

    by AntiSocial16

    Brilliant, just brilliant! lyrics im assuming, and amazing ones at that. this piece was so insistent on forgeting a someone, on the surface, and sort of having to suck that up. but at the end, a major twist, which makes it such an enjoyable and astounding read! i loved this piece! please keep writing and stay safe, strong, and healthy!
    an avid fan,
    *AntiSocial16*

  • Amazing poem...really expressive, I like it a lot:) Good writting. 5/5!
    -Shannon

  • 11 years ago

    by limp

    You're justabit nice. & I love it. & you. & stuff. rly. & you're pretty much awesome. & that's pretty much why I copy off you. & I should probably end it here. k?k!

  • 11 years ago

    by limp

    ^god wut a lozer

  • 11 years ago

    by limp

    Oh w8! datz me lolss!!2