It's growing; developing

by Drew Gold   May 3, 2006


It's growing, developing
like a cancer
inside the canteen with
moisture; dank and heavy
hotness we'd drink upon
to quell our savior's thirst
and send our cries
to bed late at night. singing
thirstily, my god springs
thru the swamp, thru
the weeds and settles
on a lily-pad with his tongue
lolling about, dumbly
like he can make it
past the mist and turn
religious. Perfect size
for the wanting kind, he
sheds his mane and grows
through flames towards
sky and smoke; untamed.

jewels diamond his mouth,
and he tells everyone:
you can have it--
me. you've just as much
to pray as you believe
and dont question
such bothersome sights.

spare me
the bottom-feeding
sanctity inside yourself;
those rash calculations
of determined reasoning.

the virus is inside us
all and we've succumbed
like bowing to its feet.
the skies slant downwards;
in sheets of rain we wrap
ourselves
underneath the covers:
rapt submission
to demi-gods and jesus
Christs'.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Chris

    Very deep.
    I can feel the power of the words.
    kind of confused on the message but the writing is great.
    another good poem

    keep it up

    5/5

    chris

  • 17 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    I hope to learn from you.
    you have such talent and knowledge.
    i hope you find somewhere to use this talent for some kind of gain other then pleasure.
    ~Emah
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Fallen Angel

    *takes a step back*...that was a truely amazing poem...*opens mouth (closes it again)* I'm really not sure what else I can say, genuinely left me speechless...Just the inspired use of enjambment and slanted rhyme which gives it such a unique and fractured feel whilst allowing it to flow smoothly from line to line and the brilliant imagery, beauty always tainted, and the final stanza which just completes the poem tying together the idea of cancer introduced in the first line by referring to virus...insidious and deadly. Beautiful (is that the right word though...=P) Just an amazing piece 5/5 x