Dear god...

by blood staind wrist   May 3, 2006


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Dear god please Kill Me
here I stand im Tattered and torn
it aches so bad
the darkness is covering and there is no light to be found
here I stand I am Tattered and torn
This is a nightmare, so dark and so cold
I am Suffocating, and screaming for help
don't know how much more I can take
I have been broken a thousand times before
Driven to the verge of insanity
I have so many enemies I can not count
the nerve I have to think I belong
Always living up to others expectations
In the blink of an eye ill be gone
into the abyss I will rest
my wrist open with the blood dripping
hope they learn their lessons
Tearing myself open for all the pain I tried to hide
May they learn their lesson and never judge again

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    by she

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    by somehow broken

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    by Momentary Relapse

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