Comments : Asking for Brighter Days

  • 17 years ago

    by Lost & Delirious

    I like this poem, it has a sad story and a beautiful message. It's amazing. Keep writing. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Autuumnbree

    Very good poem and also well written and I think it have alot meaning behind it...........GJ

  • 17 years ago

    by dee

    Your poems really amazing. the flow and story it tells make you think.
    dee

  • 17 years ago

    by blueknight

    Avery strange feeling inside it for a reason you learn or what it means to say good work