Comments : Confessions of a Broken Heart

  • 11 years ago

    by Kaylee

    Your poem was really well written. It didn't go into much detail but just about broke my heart. The only thing I would suggest is maybe changing this bit:
    I still can't seem to face
    The fact we're not together
    Cause I'd always thought
    We'd be together forever
    ^^The two together's kind of take imapct from each other. Maybe the last line oculd be, "We'd always be forever." or something like that. But it's up to you.

  • 11 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    The rhyme was not forced and the poem flow very will and reflected a lot of passion

  • 11 years ago

    by BrokenMisery

    That seriously touched my heart, i'm going through the exact same! Good use of words, you rhymed them perfectly with correct meter and none of the lines feel forced or out of context. Great job, i know what you're going through, and it hurts A LOT!

    good luck and great job with your poetry and your future.
    love kt

  • 11 years ago

    by Mark

    This poem was so good! I loved every moment reading it.. Great work !!

  • 11 years ago

    by pseudo

    Wow.. Great poem.. It flowed very well I could even say it flowed perfectly! It caught my eye... Very emotional poem but I think some of the best poems are written out of pure emotion.. awesome write! =)

    --emotionless.19*

  • 11 years ago

    by TonyaTragic

    All i can say is BEAUTIFUL!

  • 11 years ago

    by amber

    WOW! that brought back alot of pain i keep hindden away believe me sweet heart i know what you are talking about and how you are feeling for me the pain never went way but like i said it took me 2 yrs to put it behind me but not a day goes by that i dont think of him and wonder why hes with her when we were suppose to be together forever in my mind the poem was awesome i loved it!

  • 11 years ago

    by Raychil

    Wonderful poem. I've been through that too, you did a very good job at expressing your feelings. It broke my heart. I hope things turn out for the best for you.

    And thanks for your comment.

  • 11 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    Wow This kinda goes with my poem
    Excellent Job
    Lovely Rhyme
    wonderful Flow
    Heart-felt message
    This poem was just amazing
    keep it up
    5/5
    ~TPOMH~

  • 11 years ago

    by Keri

    Loved it :D

  • 11 years ago

    by Shay

    This is a great poem! While I was reading it, I could totally relate to what you were saying. This poem is one of the best I have read! Terrific Job!

  • 11 years ago

    by Felicia

    I love this poem. keep it up!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Brittany Paige

    That poem is really sweet and it kinda reminds me of some probs a had wit a guy...
    But eventually u will get over them i promise.
    You will find someone elz who loves u more than u love them
    well got to go love ya bye
    please return the fav!

  • 11 years ago

    by August

    Avril Lavenge once wrote something like this that touched my heart like your poem just did. I think it was something like "Everyone just broke my heart...something something...I'm a teenager so I really care about how sad I am...something something...I can be more depressed than you."

    Anyhow, you can get the gist of it! 5/5!

  • 11 years ago

    by Keri

    I love ur poems there very good keep up the good work..

  • 11 years ago

    by ~rEjEcTiOn QuEeN~

    Oh my gosh your poem just described how I feel at this very moment. Its perfect I love it!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Ashlee

    I love your poem .. my boyfriend and i of 3years just broke up and thats just how i feel!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by tamara

    This is a really really good poem..
    and i am going through exactly what you're going through, at this present moment.. it hurts so much, to see the person you love, walk away with another person's hand in theirs. i completely understand..
    nice work.. keep it up. xo

  • 11 years ago

    by Lost & Delirious

    This is a beautiful poem, I love it. It's so sincere, and the message is so thoughful. Great job. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by elly

    Wow, I have felt that way before. I liked this poem. ^-^