It's a very cute little scene, kind of makes you go "aww". My favorite part was definitely the third stanza. The only thing I'm not sure of is your use of the word "chamber". I don't really know what you were trying to say with that but it could just be me. Great job, and as always, it stuns me how concise you can be. I envy that.

Hi !
Actually i like this poem for a unique reason!
yea.. it made me feel while readin' it, as if i was watchin' it! Sure i watched ur poem؛‎ ‎not only read it...!
Keep it up,
regards,
5/5