The Unspoken, The Unforgettable

by The Poetic Child   May 7, 2006


Late nights laying down in bed,
leaving space, for no-one to come
Emptiness on the other side
knowing she will not show up

your mind turns into a common
when all thats in your mind is her
While all that is in her mind
is someone that is no where near you

She cries at night and wonders
Wonders bout a man you cant be
and you cry and cry to let it out
knowing your tears will never be reached

But you cant help but have that tear
have that tear fall with no one
No-one to wipe it away from your face
the tear falls, and you let it fall

Dreaming of a fantasy,
dreaming that she loves you
Waking up minutes later
Waking up with a broken soul

Thinking about the UN-spoken
Words you wish you chose to say
but those words never came out..
and you regret it at that moment

and then comes, The Unforgettable
When all the memories come to mind
and you think of the lasting days
Of just you and her and no one else

The time when you'd kiss and kiss
and your world seemed to be perfect
When it just you and her together
and your life just seemed great..

Dedication- Dedicated to those who love someone so much and want to let them know, but that other is thinking of someone....that isnt you...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    I like every stanza except the last one. Flow is superb and than comes last stanza... Last line totally throw me off. Anyway this poem is excellently written and it deserves 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Kellsie Lynn

    Wow! that one made me cry. so many people feel the same way at one point or another...trust me I did once too. and you did an awesome job of expressing the emotions you felt. this was probably one of my favorites. email me so we can talk more about it plz
    Kell

  • 17 years ago

    by stargirl49

    I reeeaaalllyy like this poem. it reminds me of how i felt a few months ago when i had a huge crush on a guy at my school. he definitely didn' feel the same about me. lissa knows what i'm talking about. :( keep up the good work!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Just That Girl

    This Is Such A Great Poem...But Then Again All Your Poems Are Great! I Mean Your Poems Hold A Message That Is Very Clear And Has A Wonderful Meaning! Keep Up The Great Work...
    Take Care...
    Luv,
    The Bell :]

  • 17 years ago

    by Just That Girl

    This Is Such A Great Poem...But Then Again All Your Poems Are Great! I Mean Your Poems Hold A Message That Is Very Clear And Has A Wonderful Meaning! Keep Up The Great Work...
    Take Care...
    Luv,
    The Bell :]