Wow this is really good. very...intruiging. I love the way that you ended. And I love the overall poem also. It is very well written.. it flowed well and I love the meaning behind it. Great job! 5/5*

Very good! great use of imagery there! keep it up!
jessy

Great descriptions! I really liked this line:
Journal spotted with ink dripping from an unknown pen.
It has great meaning! I also really like how in some parts you had fragments, it makes it more mysterious. Great job! It was beautiful! 5/5

Another good poem. I liked the title of this poem, it really caught my eye.

Your writing is so amazing!!
Keep it up!
Your words are sooo beautiful!

Really grabbing stuff. A stunning use of language, and amazing imagery. The use of rhyme was delicate and effective. I also really liked the way the poem was split into two parts, really gave it a sense of resolution. Great stuff x 5/5 x

Again u are an awesome poet i luv it great job 5/5 all the way!!!

WOW what a great poem, you've really got a talent, wish i could write as good as you keep up the good work hun.
thanks for your comments.

xoxoxox

Another great poem! your just really good at this arnt ya? :P keep it up!
5/5
jessy

There's a maturity to this beyond your tender years and it has a much better flow than the other stuff of yours that I've read. It's a real attention grabber.

Very similar to a poem I wrote. Well, some parts. I like it. I honestly do. You have a gift dear.