A very confusig peice by me, it's a poem about seeing death as comfort. and love as love.

Wow..this is very deep and full of alot of meaning..ur very talented..:)

I agree wth Amz this is very deep and full of meanings...this is the truth of life as life has to end one day

very well said

keep it up

good luck :)

It is a bit hard 2 understand but i like it it's gud x

Yeah your right I dont understand it but it sounds good anyways. lol. Your a great poet just keep writing.

---Summer

Hey this is a really great poem and i'm going to keep reading your poems to remember you. i just want you to know that i do already miss you and i'm really up set that your gone.
I LOVE YOU AND IM SORRY THAT WE DIDNT TALK BEFORE YOU GOT IN THE CAR ACCADENT.
LOVE ALWAYS AND FOREVER,
TARA

This is really good you are a good poet..

Your An Awesome Poet Dude Another Mad Job, This One Was So Meaningful, I LOVED It!

It doesn't make much sense to me....but that is sometimes what makes great poems great....i love the wording and writing style....amazingly written