You Thrill Me!!!

by Robert Gardiner   May 9, 2006


You Thrill Me!!!

I look into your eyes and get lost, every time.
Don't know what it is, but there's something I like.
I look, at your face, could stare at it, endlessly.
When I see you smile, oh, what that does to me.
Your essence, alone, exhilarates me.
I'm in, heaven, each time you're next to me.
Your hair, lustrous and beautiful, I picture it, sometimes, as it flows, in the wind.
All the wonders, about you, to describe, I can't begin.
The thought of you, alone, to me, it is, heaven.
Your lips, soft and sensual, captivate me, to know end.
I could spend hours, just watching you speak.
With your each and every word, I'm drawn in, ever so deep.
You Thrill Me!!!
Skinny legs, skinny fingers, but that doesn't matter at all.
See, all of that's just trivial, when you're really in love.
You Thrill Me!!!
Now Amanda, I know, you past isn't one of a convent girl,
And I know, in your mind, you don't think you deserve love girl.
I know, that you're imperfect, but girl, yet, still,
I still love you and this love is real, you thrill me!!!
You Thrill Me!!! You Thrill Me!!! You Thrill Me!!!
On the outside you're very beautiful; it's easy for all eyes to see.
But it more than just what on the outside, in you, I see, true beauty.
And that's why I love. Girl, You Thrill Me!!!

Robert Gardiner
R.G.Love

As always, your comments and votes greatly appreciated, thank you!!!

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This poem was written to a girl Amanda that I use to work with, whom I care about and looked after. She had some self esteem isues and had a little bit of a wayward adolesence. I wrote this to show her some positive love and to help build her up as a person. Although she was a little lost at times, I could see in her there was someone worthy of love and of saving. I have not seen her in an eon, but I hope life finds her well and her world is blessed with love, happiness, and positivity!!!

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  • 17 years ago

    by May

    Great poem! I can tell that you're a very passionate person and that definitely shows in your poems! -May

  • 17 years ago

    by sol

    Excelent write. keep it up u!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Cuddles

    This is so beautiful. It makes one feel warm and lovely. Wonderful dedication!

  • 17 years ago

    by blueknight

    Wow such a hertful way of writting dude a great motivation are exerted here great great great job 10/10 wow

  • 17 years ago

    by Desiree

    I am also a girl with low self esteem so i know what this would mean to that girl and if we all had some one like you there would be a lot less suicides and i want to thank you for saving that girl