This poem is da shit man keep it up

This poem is awsome dawg it da shit thats how i feel about my girl keep it up homes. 5/5

Jay Jay

THe imagery is somwhat apsent and it doesnt flow to well buut the concep adn lvoe is great!!

Lissa

Excellent write, although I'm not big on slang, this was well written. The flow was good and the rhymes where great, keep up the great work.

Peace, Joe

Beautiful. The raw feelings. Just amazing. It's great to have that someone to cry and smile with. All the best to you and your gf.
A very beautiful poem.
5/5

This was a truely amazing poem and its filled with a emotions
5/5
Beautiful Job!!!