Comments : Your Lies

  • 17 years ago

    by blueknight

    Perpect you done a great poem keep it up your great

  • 17 years ago

    by Avellana

    *hugs* I HATE that feeling, :(

    Your poem is so... I can feel your hurt.

    *hugs more*

    xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by ♥kHarIsMa♥

    This poem makes me wanna cry..it explains every feeling i have... ur wonderful, talented and gifted..keep writing...and god bless u...

  • 17 years ago

    by JAY Poet

    I really liked your poem!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Mona

    Wow.. Once again just wow Emma.

    Brilliantly written, it's so sad. Especially the part in your second stanza where you say "thank you... thank you"

    That really suddenly brought a lot of power to the poem, and from there on it was just screaming to my soul.

    Very well done sweety. Loved it

    Lotsaaaaaa love
    -xxx-

  • 17 years ago

    by Nee

    Awwww!!! your poem was amazingly written and wonderfully expressed!!
    you know I cud so relate to this one! you reminded me of my ex!!!!
    I hope things turn to be okay with you!
    I loved your poem I swear it's amazing!
    keep it up
    Luv
    NemO x0x0x0x0x0x

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenny521

    Your poem is amazing....It really does relate to me and my ex perfectly...Cannot believe how much it relates..Pretty scary really...Anyway great poem...Well done

  • 17 years ago

    by Janette Rmz

    Wow I can so relate with your poem I just got out of relationship like that and which I miss him so but his hurt me so. Nice I feel it keep up the great work 5/5.

    Janet

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    I understand exactly where you are coming from. The same thing has happened to me recently and that poem really hit home. Awesome job.

  • 17 years ago

    by melissa

    Omg i love your poem... i mean it has so much thought and its meaningful...
    take care

    ~melissa~

  • 17 years ago

    by Sarah

    Aww this poem is incredible
    you have great skills!
    5/5
    much love
    Sarah
    x

  • 17 years ago

    by *~*Jackie J*~*

    What can i say...... u left me without words. its like if you somehow knew what i'm going trough. its hard but like i always say THINGS HAPPEN FOR A REASON. great job........
    LOVE......S.U.C.K.S

  • O wow! this was an AWESOME poem! your a great writier so keep up the hard work and keep the poems coming! thanks for writing this it was great! XoOx molly

  • 17 years ago

    by Kyle

    I know Im a dude but seriously you made me about cry...wonderful poem...thank you

  • 17 years ago

    by Catherine

    Wow, that was a really good poem. It made me sad just reading it, and that is what I look for in a poem. I want to feel exactly how the wpoet who wrote the poem was feeling. Good job, it is a very good poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by Catherine

    Wow, that was a really good poem. It made me sad just reading it, and that is what I look for in a poem. I want to feel exactly how the wpoet who wrote the poem was feeling. Good job, it is a very good poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Good description.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Good description.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Good description.

  • 17 years ago

    by eternitySOlong

    That is so beautiful. Oh my god. I am so sorry. I told you I'd e-mail you and I haven't. So much has happened I honestly don't know where to begin. I'm going to try this weekend. I'm going to be on probation soon so...I'll be writing often. Oh...so much has happened and this poem makes me wonder what's happened wit you! I love you and I'm sorry!!!!