Last Note

by Extinct Angel   May 10, 2006


I need a little understanding for all I've ever done
I'm in a situation I don't belong,
I wonder if things will be better when I'm gone
This is my last note of resent
I have no more regret
My dad won't leave me alone
So I have decided to go
I'm moving to a different place
it'll either be heaven or hell
this is my suicide note
I have plans to kill myself
Everyday people will look
and wonder what went wrong
My girlfriend will wonder
What she's done
Nothing She loved me
I loved her so much
But I couldn't see the light
At the end of my life's tunnel
This pain is cascading from me to her
Dying as I burn in Hell
For all the sins I have committed
By the time you've finished reading this letter of last note
My soul will be afloat
So goodbye to everyone I love you all
i'm not playing games
Take it or leave it
Only reason I wrote it is so
You know what happened to me

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  • 17 years ago

    by Daenerys Stormborn

    Hmm, well good poem but it is almost more of a letter than a poem instead of both at the same time.

  • 17 years ago

    by dyingbrokenangel

    Mike no.. please.. mike! i havent spoken 2 u for so long and im sorry but i love you i do i love you!!
    i know things r hard mike but they r hard 4 me to and i am tryin 2 help you.
    please dont do this
    i love you

  • 17 years ago

    by Knoxy

    Hey, i havent talked to you forever...this is a good poem...i know what you mean...but dont take that way out...i believe there is a purpose for everyone...no matter what...some ppl have it better than others...but look how far you've made it...look how many ppl care about you..you are a great guy..we need u here...*hugz* luv ya dude
    ~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

  • 17 years ago

    by Just Another Chemical Romance

    Oh my god mike, plz, i hope to god this is not tru i love you

  • 17 years ago

    by Andrea broken tears

    Hhmmmp well if this really is goodbye then i did love you but something changed me...if you are really gone your life and you will still live but only your body will be in heaven..

    andrea