Lol, niccccceeee :P i really liked this poem 5/5 great job :)

*blink blink* *bows down* ALL HAIL THE AMAZING POEM. This poem really touched me. This is the first of all your poems that i've read and it they are all that good than shakespear has nothing on you. AMAZING poem

Like he said. :)

I like it so amazing

Wow that was brilliant i loved it especially the last 2 lines