Oh, Luanne...this gave me chills and brought tears to my eyes.
You have a beautiful way with words. I love how you reminisce throughout about hugs and mud pies...absolutely adorable.
But the ending is the best! The best part of me is you...couldn't have said it better myself.
Take care dear twin....love ya~Holly

Every day you bring me gifts
of smiles and warm hugs
I smile when you pick me dandelion's
even though they're full of bugs

You invite me for dinner
mud pies and grass soup
we play a little one on one
as I lift you to make a hoop

^^^ i miss those days so much with my mom and dad :( Alright ya wench you made me cry!!! i loved this poem! Happy belated to your boy!! Gosh kids grow so fast hey? I cant believe I'm going to be 15 in 3 weeks! Time flys Luanne but no doubt your soaking up every minute of it while you can! Loved this write!
Chels

What a magical, touching write. Your happiness shines in this poem. I smiled and felt warmed throughout this beautiful write. I hope you both had a wonderful day !!!!

That touched me. great write.

Wowwwwww luanne....youre so amazing at writing. i loved it with all my heart. the last line was a truly marvellous ending...the way u ventured into the past when your son was even smaller, really added beauty to the poem.

Hugs and Love, Dhaval
P.S. Wish your son a very happy budday from me, and it looks like he's got some genes of sunny, tree climbing and all..HAHA..cya

That was such an adorbale poem!! it was so cute and hopefully little Josh loved it as much as i do...5/5!!!

Hye
lovely poem.
5/5

Aww.. that is so adorable! you must be a wonderful mother luanne! excellent poem, i cant say anything else, it was just so sweet, and so maternal.. i truly loved it! 10/5