Oh my golly gosh lucy. you have done it again. how? how? tell me damn you. every poem is so amazingly unique and brilliantly worded. i am soooo jealous. *sulks* this was so powerful, loved the last line, it left so much to the reader and made me shiver *shivers*. hehehe. damn you. you are such a damned brilliant writer.
\\//\\//(())\\//\\//!! I lovve iit!!..it s good..noce flow && everything, Thank you kindly for your comments its really helpful, && just for the record..I AM SHIT SCARED OF BUTTERFLIES!!..n eways, im gunn ago read usm more of your poems, && see if they compare to this fantastic poem:)