Falling

by Alissa   May 14, 2006


Dear god I'm falling,
falling in love.
Dieing in his arms,
dear god I'm falling in love.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Hmm yeah it was pretty good but im not yet satisfied. it short but sweet though...
    but anyway,, i have to read some more....

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Very short but still powerful. I like atmosphere of this piece, you created it with just a few words. You described emotions strongly. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Corruption

    This is good not ur best work but it is i think ur first peom and it is good well written short and ot the point good job

    keenan

  • 17 years ago

    by Emma

    Itss cutee x

  • 17 years ago

    by Breanna

    CUTE!