Comments : Tears I Have Cried

  • 17 years ago

    by Bridgette

    This is really sad.. You put so many emotions in this & the flow & rhythm of it was really good. I'm really sorry about what all is going on with your step dad. It always helps to talk about it. Great job on this & I hope everything is ok.

  • 17 years ago

    by lost_laureate

    Very sad yet somewhat minimalistic I want to know more about the relationship between the girl and her father, what other emotions besides the obvious are behind these tears. Still very sad....develop the ideas further and I'll be reaching for the kleenex

    [lost_laureate - come find me]

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Aww.. wow, that was very good! i hope its not true, but i cant b too sure as it is so well written! keep it up!
    jessy xox

  • 17 years ago

    by Fallen~Tears

    Awwwww nice poem. soooo sad.. i really hope it never happened to you 5/5

    ~!*FallenTears~!*
    ~!*Meaghen~!*

  • 17 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Aw how sad, if its tru i am sry:(. gr8 poem tho, tuns of emotion and detail. 5/5
    ~*Who Cares?*~

  • 17 years ago

    by ღHazel_Kittenღ

    Hey linz, you need to work on your rythm a bit but other then that you're doing great. I look forward to reading more poems of yours

    BTW
    Somebody hacked my e-mail addy so I had to get a new one so sorry if I didn't reply to any of your new messages lata

    Mia

  • 17 years ago

    by Matt Carroll

    Well well, long time no see...rythm is a little off but I like it it's real good, 5/5 keep it up yo peace.
    ~-H-Townz Finest-~

  • 17 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Hmm..very diffrent, in the flow and rythym that is. I liked it though. I thought it was nicely exicuted. :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    W.O.W

    A very good piece here. Lots and lots of emotion. Just the way I like it. Although I do hope this isn't based on anything true. Keep up the great work! 5/5

    `Taleee xx

  • 17 years ago

    by nikki

    Omg girl is this true?? well i can rly relate so i like it 5/5 and if its true then im sry he hit you

  • 17 years ago

    by Dark_Angel

    YHAH!!!!!!!!!ROCK ON!!!!!!!!!!