Beautifully composed....i loved the way u made me want to read more....!!!

I love the lind, "feeling hardly less than dead." it really drew me into what u were saying. Very well written.

Incredible poem, you need to post more poetry! Reading this poem, I started having flashbacks of being in the same situation which made me sort of depressed but at the same time that just goes to show how powerfully you write. Good work

Much better than your other poems, i really enjoyed reading this. the more the write, the more you will improve. keep the goodness :)

*the more you write, the more you will improve. my bad. yeah anyway, good poem

Hey kelly !!!

this is an excelant poem ... when u read it at Open Mic Night everyone loved it and why wouldnt they its awesome!!!
i love all of ur poems