Comments : Fear of the Daisies' (Tanka)

  • 17 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Unusual, yet very overpowering. you never cease to amaze me!

    shobhana

  • 17 years ago

    by Melissa

    Wow, this is awesome too! I love the creativity within this poem...

    "the daisy's laugh with vengeance"
    ^^^ Love this line, perfect ending also! Incredible poem!

  • 17 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    "the daisy's laugh with vengeance" it should be 'daisies'

    This poem made me think of the "he loves me, he loves me not" thing that people do when the pull flower petals off the stem.

    Made me feel sorta lonely. =P

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Great write again. I really enjoy reading your work. 5/5