Talee i love your poems your poems are filled with so much emotion you must put a lot of work into them even no it short it seems so long with all the power you put into it i love it 5/5.
♥ Jean

Wow.. thats exactly wot i wnt 2

Such an unique and powerful poem! I somtimes feel like this as well. Your flow was sweet and simple, and your rhyming didn't appear to be forced which made this poem a one of a kind treasure! But i'm sure in one line, if regret and secret really rhyme. Other than that yet another amazingly insperational poem written by you! So keep writting and I'll keep commenting!

It wasn't that detailed but it does get the message across. The would there kind of threw me off. I think you mean, "They're" but other than that I'm going to have to agree with the above posters. Don't want to be too repetitive :)

This is an absolutly fantastic piece really detailed and easy to relate to.

keep up the good work hun

gema xoxoxox

Hehe short

but a great read
I liket he flow and the rhyming scheme

so a good 5/5

Very good job on the writing hun, but some of the ending lines could have alil more emotion placed in them. But, I truely liked it very much. i took the over view of it meaning something diiferent then what you meant it to e but that is how poems are veryoen has thier own views on them so it was good.

That was great. The use of tear out my truth is very heart-felt. By the way i happen to be best mates with that Joe Hesketh guy.

Joe xxx

That was great. The use of tear out my truth is very heart-felt. By the way i happen to be best mates with that Joe Hesketh guy.

Joe xxx

Short but to the point!!! Great write!! I truley loved it you are very talented!!! Keep it up!! 5/5

It did get its point across through words perfect for this piece. Images were not as sharp or vivid but it conveyed what it needed to. Rather well done.
~Fallen

I really like this and I love the meaning behind it because I'm sure that there is many people that can relate to it. you did a great job on this. The flow & rhythm of it was perfect. Great job.. I loved it.

Yeah, it is a little confusing but you did a great job.

That made me fell what you where felling at the time, you used your heart to write this poem i loved it keep write

I really like your poem! It's very powerful and I like the repetitiveness. I'd love to read more of your work.

W.O.W.

i love this poem. i friggin love it. it's exactly how i feel, actually. =/

but yeah.

i'm gonna make you tell me the truuuuuth! =P mmk?

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Hey hun, wow I love this poem it is so unique. The flow and rhyme was great and I totally understood what you were saying. I love it! Well done and take care,
Polly 5/5

Poems usually have their own hidden meanings to it's readers. That's one reason I love it to much. You could write for yourself, and it make sense to other people.

Anyways, this was a really good poem. It wasn't too short, it was the perfect size. Very well written with very strong emotions. Your rhymes were good and everything flowed. Awesome stuff :)

Wow, thats incredible! i feel exactly the same way to. amazing poem!

I liked it alot...i was a lil confused at first but i get it now...i liked the message good job...keep writing