Comments : Missing you

  • 17 years ago

    by SilenceBreaksTheHeart

    Hey that was such a beautiful poem. I loved it. It was well written, flowed perfectly, and I loved your choice of words. Great job

    I'm here thinking of you.
    while you're there thinking of me.
    I wonder if you're wearing
    the smile I gave you.

    ^^^That was my favorite stanza...I loved the emotion you put into this poem. Keep it up.
    5/5 for sure
    Breanna