Secrets

For SUCH A SHORT POEM it really flowed and sounded really good.. good job and keep up with the work.. sorry there isn't anything that Iwould change about this

How true. poetry can be our way out of so much. You described that perfectly in this piece. Funny how we pretend nothing is wrong than post these words here that show all the problems within our own lives. Granted, sometimes we write what isn't applicable to us, but often we do, whether we know it or not. A good piece!
Charisma*

I really liked this poem. to the point and so true. you plainly give the reasons for writing poetry that i think are true of all of us. good work
rocky

Loved it. It's so true, the secret that every poem holds within it. But sometimes, it's possible to break the defences that the poems hold. And sometimes, tru emotion can show through any poem. As this one. It not only does justcie to itself, but to every other one of your poems. It makes your other poems all seem 'truer' as it were, it brings out their true light.
Amazing write.

Peace. [Sole]

Love it! Very true