Hehe.. i love this.. dont ask me why, but i actually started tearing up and was gonna cry.. lol.. i dunno, i guess there was something about ur words and the fact that they were hypnotizing; as in a lullaby or a hum.. i just loved it from A to Z
gr8 job
take care
n thnx 4 the comment
NannO

That is really good.. I've never ridden on an airplane before but the way that you described really makes me want to! The imagery in this was really good nad the rhythm of it really held up well.. you did a great job on this!

Hey I loved this poem. It was expressed well and deserves a 5. I enjoyed reading it. Well done :)

Very well written peice, it has a good flow and a strong atmosphere about it. the words are very well chosen to suck in the reader and the descriptions are very good also.

5/5

Lol.. This was cool! I love planes lol there so much fun. I hope you had a good time on the plane. I always do lol. Anywho back to the poem.. It was a good poem. Wasn't too long but wasn't too short. Just right. Flow and rhyme scheme were good also. Awesome job overall. Loved it. 5/5

`taleee xx

Very nice-you have a very unique way of writing and this is beautiful, vivid, descriptive without going over board

Sondos

Very very nice, i liked it a lot, the meaning, the flow, the style just everything! very unique and good!

**meggie**

You know how to keep the reader hooked the whole way through... i love flying.... everything about flying i love... the free-ness, excitement. And i love this poem... Just another great poem to add to your collection 5/5 -Jen-

Awesome!
I really love the way you put words together!! You are so talented!!

Jen

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Wicked I really liked this poem a nice subject to write about and all in all a pleasent poem to read
great job!
Aaron (remo)

Haha. Thats adorable. It flows suprisingly well aswell. Haha. I really did enjoy this poem.

You expressed your thoughts and feelings beautifully. The fact that you were on a plane while writing this is just amazing.. it makes it so much more real. I shall definately remember this poem as I take off on a plane this summer... Maybe I'll even write a few of my own? :D

I love being on the plane!! I think I want to travel when I'm older. Ohh, it would be so much fun! haha.