I have to agree with brandy. completely. you wrote a great poem and the rhythem was pretty good. 5/5

There's nothing wrong with this at all. I'm just not really into this. It has great words and imagery but it's not my style. Really don't know what to say about it except that though as well written as it was I just couldn't get into this. So...yeah great write except not one that I personally like though there are others who'll like it. Did like the end of the third stanza.
~Faith-less

Wow.
ive found my poet.
thank you your in my favs.
~Emah
5/5