This is really good. it's for the content where you must include certain words is it not? well you have done very well, the words do not look out of place at all, in fact you cannot even tell which they are proving that you did not have to force them in. the piece flows well thoughout with no rough areas at all and the content is very well written and expressed.

5/5

Wow! this poem is an amazing spell binding masterpiece in my opinion

I was captured by the imagery from the begining. Then blown away by the depth. It seriously reminded me of the work of great mystic poets. I would also like to comment on its univresal flow which I believe trancends any language boundries. Other than that I am speechless

That was brilliant. i really enjoyed reading it. keep it up
xxxx

Truely talented in every way. Well done girl.

Wow such a refreshing read... amazing job the word choices were so unique it was wonderful..

Wow.. you are truly talented! that was amazing! you used such a wide selection of words, it flowed perfectly, and it was so deep! excellent work!

Wow that is really good.. I really like the way that you ended it, the last line really left a great impact. The imagery in this is really good and I like the meaning behind it. You did a great job, as always. I loved it. It's something that I'm sure many people can relate to. Great job on this! I definitely give it a 5/5**

Wow, awesome write. That was great how you incorporated all the words. You have an amazing way to word your words. :)

Peace, Joe

Hey I loved the poem. Your choice of words and the way you expressed yourself was amazing. Just one of the most amazing poems i've ever read and you deserve a 5 without a doubt. Keep writing hun :)

P.s Good luck in the contest :)

WOW! This was really good. I can't even pick a favourite stanza. They were all great. The way you write is so good. It's like theres a hidden message beneath the words, And I like that alot. Really good job yet again. Don't ever stop writing okay. 5/5

`taleee xx

Beautiful, so immensely metaphorical a real feast to read. Brilliant!

I love the title: Wandering Soul. The words that you chose are so original and unique. Great job! 5/5
Keep writing.

I really really liked this poem and it is really good for a contest hopefully you won cause it was great

much love

Marlena

Ahh sometimes all it takes is a contest to bring out some of the best poetry in people! I love the words you choose, all very origonal and older english which is always beautiful to read! The flow was a bit choppy due to you breaking of the sentances kind of funny after each line. But an all round beautifuly spoken peice!

Ah..What stuck out at first was your word choices, I love this poem though, it's so perfect and flows nicely. You are so talented. Keep Them Coming in!

Thank is the best poem ever

I am blown away by your depth in this piece, it truly is a masterpiece, one I will enjoy reading over and over again. Thanx, Timothy r

Of course darkness can not disappear
entirely with light, never all.

You couldn't have described darkness better.

Wonderful play of words - this poem reveals so much more than the obvious - our incessant thirst to move on lest time passes us by;

reading your work is always so refreshing.

good luck and peace
shobhana

Amazing write! honestly, i think this would win any contest!

5.5