Dying through the phone

by *LPFMangel*   May 20, 2006


I was on the phone talking to my friend
when she heard a knock at the door
she told me to hold on and opened the door i heard a slap, and again
she screamed so loud when she hit the floor
she dropped the phone and screamed some more
i panicked and shouted her name
no answer but a scream again
i needed to get there as soon as possible
i yelled for a taxi but none stopped it was impossible
so i stopped a car and threw the driver out
i drove off but i felt doubt
i hung on to the phone and all i could hear were screaming and crying
she got so bad it sounded like she was dying
but i was right, after a while i could here nothing
and then a sudden smashing
i screamed into the phone "I'm coming"!
but again it went all quiet and then the phone was dying
and suddenly cut off
and i didn't make it, the police were there and i wanted to help, but it wasn't enough
she was gone, that idiot raped and killed her
but i will never forget her, she was my best friend
i miss her everyday, and i hope it will never happen to anyone again

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  • 17 years ago

    by Emma

    Wow....This was a really powerful poem...it was so amzing...i just cant believe it...Amazing...
    Emma 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Twisted Mind Broken Soul

    Hey that was a really good/sad poem. but is it true? that's what I wanna know