That's the best poem i've read all day (not to mention the most sad) It made me cry it was really good...5/5 keep up the good work!

Wow this poem is really sad but itz really good..it left me speech less..
wow itz great..5/5..

Yeah, like everyone else said, this poem is sooo sad, buts its a really good poem. i cant think of anything else to say..its one of those things thats just makes you think...

Really this means alot to me
i dont know my dad so ur lucky u even have 1 luv me xx

I like it, yeah it is sad, but my friend goes through the same thing!!!

Wow...this is REALLY sad!! But it's REALLY good!! lol i totally gave u a 5/5!! You should read my poem called "Dear Daddy"...same as yours...lol my dad doesn't hit me but i AM scared of him for many reasons...he just doesn't care about me...so i know how that feels!! I know how it feels to be pushed away...but anyway..this is a GREAT poem!! Keep it up! :)

Well first of all good poem...Ive been through a lot of stuff with my dad and it seems like something I would have written. You commented on one of my poems a bulimia one, and I wanted to say thanks. It helps to know that Im not alone in this...keep your head up and even though right now it seems like it couldn't things will get better... best wishes.

Much Love,
Jordan-Paige

Wow this is truly touching. i'm sorry for the situation. the poem is wonderful. the format i like it and the words flow. i feel sorry you had to go through that. or even if you went through it. but there are people in this world sadly who experience what you wrote.

Love this poem very touching

Wow, this is a very strong poem. I was abused when I was young, and Iunderstand that pain your describing in the poem.
Keep writing and ill keep reading.
i love your work..
katrina

Very good poem. Touching and real.
However, the rhyme sometimes don't fit.
All in all, the poem was a good one

5/5

Woahh, plz tell me this honestly doesnt happen to you too...
very deep, and touching poem.
i've been crying for the last 5mins about this.

very sad, but good work

Keep it up
and most importantly,
stay strong
xx