Dim with darkness

by Alissa   May 20, 2006


Dim with darkness now all around,
scared and lost not being found.

Scratches of evil soon appear,
evil tokens and souvenirs.

pounding silence everywhere,
small whimpers of soft despair.

Nowhere to run, nowhere to hide,
where fate is the one to decide.

Try to scream, try to shout,
trying hard to get out.

Soon there's a way, it's only now,
I don't want to sink or to drown.

I kick my weak legs in frantic fro,
to get away from fathoms below.

Soon it's there, so sweet and clear,
I'm almost there, almost near.

Then I'm out to take the breath,
I beat the fates for my death.

The surface is fine with air so sweet,
my life is now without defeat.

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  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    An amazing dark write. Your rhyming here is great. Love the atmosphere, yes, it's hauntingly beautiful.

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Atmosphere of this poem is amazing. You wrote it superbly. Rhyming is original and imagery is incredible. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Wow amazing..this is one of my favorites of yours....i love it...

    you're a great writer..keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Corruption

    Good poem thx for the comment but it aint that good lol well good job on this i like the rythme it was well done

    keenan

  • 17 years ago

    by ~*so*over*him*~

    Great poem!!! it sounds like its about someone drowning, but im not really sure.. but everything flows :) thanks for the comment
    *rachel*

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