Awsome poem. I say that it drags the reader in. It flowed and my favorite, It rymed. Keep up the great work. Your Friend- Aaron

Wow, I love this poem! Is it about drowning? That's the image that I got. Either way, I loved it! Thanks for your "awesome" comment on my poem, lol. I enjoyed reading this...very descriptive, leaves the reader wanting to get to the end so they'll know what happens. 5/5

~KeLLy~

Great poem!!! it sounds like its about someone drowning, but im not really sure.. but everything flows :) thanks for the comment
*rachel*

Good poem thx for the comment but it aint that good lol well good job on this i like the rythme it was well done

keenan

Wow amazing..this is one of my favorites of yours....i love it...

you're a great writer..keep it up!

Atmosphere of this poem is amazing. You wrote it superbly. Rhyming is original and imagery is incredible. 5/5

An amazing dark write. Your rhyming here is great. Love the atmosphere, yes, it's hauntingly beautiful.